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I want My British Man Now!?
We met online and he is and older british man I am so attracted to him and he loves my tight little black pussy. Lol I am in my 20s and He is 40. I want to **** him and be with him, he wants to marry me. What would you do

hey u there ?
[12:40:57 AM] : What can i do ?
[12:46:15 AM] : I have slept and thought about it my heart says one thing my head says another. i want more than just be a friend or an internet friend but how can i ask you for more.it is unfair lifes unfair that you are in the US. i cant n dont know what to do all i want is you !
[12:48:51 AM] : i need help i need you to decide for me !
[12:51:23 AM] : I know that is a cowards way out n what ever you decide i will respect the decision n noy hold any malice.
[12:52:58 AM] : i do (h) u soooooooooomuch
[12:53:46 AM: but if (h) mrans letting you go for your benefit then so be it !!!!!!
[1:07:29 AM] : its so hard !
[1:08:14 AM] : mayne if i noy contact you it will be easier for u yo move on
[1:08:51 AM] : or maybe you delete me out of your life
[1:10:00 AM] : you are young and am sure you will find real love and happiness !
[1:10:57 AM]: as for me dont worry i will just go on knowing fhat i have loved and had the real love of 3 women
[1:13:06 AM] : xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx…
[4:16:42 PM] : hey you on line ?
[6:38:56 PM] : hi it nearly 7 n u not on line u ok ????
[7:09:06 PM] : www.youtube.com/watch?v=zqBQ0hen9…
[7:09:16 PM] : please listen to the lyrics
[7:55:54 PM] : i have to go to bed text me u ok ????? atleast if u ignore me !

*This is the messge he sent me I want to get my passport and go see him
I know im a little young to say this but i think hes too old for u , u should find love with someone your own age because he might die befor u or when you meet him he might no be as you taught he would be
Who else gets PM's from random white women? Culturally Speaking?
Wednesday, December 22, 2010
sparkie774 (9:13 PM): **** YOU ****** *****!! GO suck a white mans COCK for a job!
Darian (9:14 PM): what?
sparkie774 (9:14 PM): Pick some cotton for me
Darian (9:14 PM): was this random?
Darian (9:14 PM): how do you know me from?
sparkie774 (9:15 PM): How do I know you from? This is why ******* shouldn't be allowed in schools. Even after an education, they still talk like ignorant bastards!!
Darian (9:15 PM): ***** shut the **** up
Darian (9:15 PM): slow typing ************
sparkie774 (9:15 PM): It's WHERE....WHERE do I know you from. Dumb ******
sparkie774 (9:16 PM): Lick my boots slave boy.
Darian (9:16 PM): lol suck my 9in dick u pussy *** white boy
sparkie774 (9:16 PM): I'm a white GIRL and I OWN you *****. We all own you *******, each and every one of you.
Darian (9:17 PM): lol white women ****** love me
sparkie774 (9:17 PM): White woman love to use you for their pleasure.
Darian (9:17 PM): it goes both ways
sparkie774 (9:17 PM): So you think. We are always in control.
Darian (9:18 PM): not when im always on top
sparkie774 (9:18 PM): Naw I'm just kidding. I just wanted to see your reaction to calling you a ******. HA. Peace.
Darian (9:18 PM): yea
sparkie774 (9:20 PM): you're still a ****** though.
sparkie774 (9:20 PM): I feel bad for you people. God cursing you with darkened skin. It's horrible.
Darian (9:20 PM): u would still suck my 9in dick if you met me
sparkie774 (9:21 PM): And you would lick my soft sweet tight pussy
Darian (9:21 PM): lmao sure
sparkie774 (9:22 PM): You'd **** it. I know you would. I'm gorgeous. You would die wanting to **** my sweet ***.
Darian (9:22 PM): yea this is the weirdest PM ive ever got
sparkie774 (9:23 PM): No it is not. It is the BEST PM you have ever received,.
Darian (9:23 PM): maybe an i bet i look 10x better than you
sparkie774 (9:24 PM): I would control you with my pleasure. I would suck your cock till you squirt it all over my body. I would ram my face into your *** cheeks and flick and lick your asshole with my tongue.
Darian (9:24 PM): lmao yea sounds good how old are you?
sparkie774 (9:25 PM): 23
Darian (9:25 PM): college?
sparkie774 (9:25 PM): I graduated already. Started early
Darian (9:25 PM): field?
sparkie774 (9:25 PM): Dental.
Darian (9:26 PM): i feel bad 4 u
sparkie774 (9:27 PM): I love having the power over people like that. I get to tell them to "open wide" and then stick my fist in their mouth. Sometimes I do it rough just to watch them gag.
Darian (9:27 PM): lol u should b my dentist and your just a nurse should have went for the dentist
sparkie774 (9:28 PM): I made one woman that came in lick my pussy. True story..everyone thinks I'm trolling when I tell this, but its true..I got on top of her and told her to go at it. She did it..shockingly..and came back the next week for another "checkup" LMAO
Darian (9:29 PM): lmao yea i bet you dont look that good i can tell your average but either way i would have
sparkie774 (9:29 PM): Oh you think so huh?
Darian (9:29 PM): i know so
sparkie774 (9:30 PM): I'm pretty sure you would love me like every other man
Darian (9:30 PM): thats because you date white men
Darian (9:31 PM): nothing wrong with average
sparkie774 (9:33 PM): I'm kidding..thats not me...I wouldnt show you my real picture. lmao
sparkie774 (9:33 PM): especially after i told you i forced a girl to lick my ****..ha not that dumb
Darian (9:34 PM): you think i would snitch
Darian (9:34 PM): ?
sparkie774 (9:34 PM): probably
Darian (9:34 PM): im black
sparkie774 (9:34 PM): but I want to meet that girl now. I just randomly picked her profile and now looking at it. I think I might want her to lick me too.
sparkie774 (9:35 PM): ok ok I'll show you a real picture. hold on...
Darian (9:35 PM): she looks like som1 off of craigslist
sparkie774 (9:36 PM): Really how come? I think she's hott with her tongue out like that
Darian (9:36 PM): wait no im looking at the wrong pic
Darian (9:36 PM): you didnt send me a pic
sparkie774 (9:36 PM): Must have sent it wrong.
sparkie774 (9:37 PM): This is me... I'm gorgeous. I suck cock and lick *** like a pro. I love it.
Darian (9:37 PM): did you send it?
sparkie774 (9:37 PM): I just gave you the link
Darian (9:37 PM): where do i see this link?
Darian (9:40 PM): stressmusiq@yahoo.com
Darian (9:40 PM): email it
sparkie774 (9:41 PM): naw im not going through all that trouble
Darian (9:41 PM): its simple but whatever when can i get a checkup?
Darian (9:48 PM): where did you get my email?
lol, what is a "pm", she sounds a little crazy.
Who else gets PM's from random white women?
Wednesday, December 22, 2010
sparkie774 (9:13 PM): **** YOU ****** *****!! GO suck a white mans COCK for a job!
Darian (9:14 PM): what?
sparkie774 (9:14 PM): Pick some cotton for me
Darian (9:14 PM): was this random?
Darian (9:14 PM): how do you know me from?
sparkie774 (9:15 PM): How do I know you from? This is why ******* shouldn't be allowed in schools. Even after an education, they still talk like ignorant bastards!!
Darian (9:15 PM): ***** shut the **** up
Darian (9:15 PM): slow typing ************
sparkie774 (9:15 PM): It's WHERE....WHERE do I know you from. Dumb ******
sparkie774 (9:16 PM): Lick my boots slave boy.
Darian (9:16 PM): lol suck my 9in dick u pussy *** white boy
sparkie774 (9:16 PM): I'm a white GIRL and I OWN you *****. We all own you *******, each and every one of you.
Darian (9:17 PM): lol white women ****** love me
sparkie774 (9:17 PM): White woman love to use you for their pleasure.
Darian (9:17 PM): it goes both ways
sparkie774 (9:17 PM): So you think. We are always in control.
Darian (9:18 PM): not when im always on top
sparkie774 (9:18 PM): Naw I'm just kidding. I just wanted to see your reaction to calling you a ******. HA. Peace.
Darian (9:18 PM): yea
sparkie774 (9:20 PM): you're still a ****** though.
sparkie774 (9:20 PM): I feel bad for you people. God cursing you with darkened skin. It's horrible.
Darian (9:20 PM): u would still suck my 9in dick if you met me
sparkie774 (9:21 PM): And you would lick my soft sweet tight pussy
Darian (9:21 PM): lmao sure
sparkie774 (9:22 PM): You'd **** it. I know you would. I'm gorgeous. You would die wanting to **** my sweet ***.
Darian (9:22 PM): yea this is the weirdest PM ive ever got
sparkie774 (9:23 PM): No it is not. It is the BEST PM you have ever received,.
Darian (9:23 PM): maybe an i bet i look 10x better than you
sparkie774 (9:24 PM): I would control you with my pleasure. I would suck your cock till you squirt it all over my body. I would ram my face into your *** cheeks and flick and lick your asshole with my tongue.
Darian (9:24 PM): lmao yea sounds good how old are you?
sparkie774 (9:25 PM): 23
Darian (9:25 PM): college?
sparkie774 (9:25 PM): I graduated already. Started early
Darian (9:25 PM): field?
sparkie774 (9:25 PM): Dental.
Darian (9:26 PM): i feel bad 4 u
sparkie774 (9:27 PM): I love having the power over people like that. I get to tell them to "open wide" and then stick my fist in their mouth. Sometimes I do it rough just to watch them gag.
Darian (9:27 PM): lol u should b my dentist and your just a nurse should have went for the dentist
sparkie774 (9:28 PM): I made one woman that came in lick my pussy. True story..everyone thinks I'm trolling when I tell this, but its true..I got on top of her and told her to go at it. She did it..shockingly..and came back the next week for another "checkup" LMAO
Darian (9:29 PM): lmao yea i bet you dont look that good i can tell your average but either way i would have
sparkie774 (9:29 PM): Oh you think so huh?
Darian (9:29 PM): i know so
sparkie774 (9:30 PM): I'm pretty sure you would love me like every other man
Darian (9:30 PM): thats because you date white men
Darian (9:31 PM): nothing wrong with average
sparkie774 (9:33 PM): I'm kidding..thats not me...I wouldnt show you my real picture. lmao
sparkie774 (9:33 PM): especially after i told you i forced a girl to lick my ****..ha not that dumb
Darian (9:34 PM): you think i would snitch
Darian (9:34 PM): ?
sparkie774 (9:34 PM): probably
Darian (9:34 PM): im black
sparkie774 (9:34 PM): but I want to meet that girl now. I just randomly picked her profile and now looking at it. I think I might want her to lick me too.
sparkie774 (9:35 PM): ok ok I'll show you a real picture. hold on...
Darian (9:35 PM): she looks like som1 off of craigslist
sparkie774 (9:36 PM): Really how come? I think she's hott with her tongue out like that
Darian (9:36 PM): wait no im looking at the wrong pic
Darian (9:36 PM): you didnt send me a pic
sparkie774 (9:36 PM): Must have sent it wrong.
sparkie774 (9:37 PM): This is me... I'm gorgeous. I suck cock and lick *** like a pro. I love it.
Darian (9:37 PM): did you send it?
sparkie774 (9:37 PM): I just gave you the link
Darian (9:37 PM): where do i see this link?
Darian (9:40 PM): stressmusiq@yahoo.com
Darian (9:40 PM): email it
sparkie774 (9:41 PM): naw im not going through all that trouble
Darian (9:41 PM): its simple but whatever when can i get a checkup?
Darian (9:48 PM): where did you get my email?
I never do and you need to go make a sandwich.
I had sex with my aunt?
okay back story first my mom n aunt are from Houston originally my mom n aunt are the only 2 my grandparents ever had and when my mom was18 they died in a car crash so her n my aunt ( only 3 at the time) moved to arizona with my moms boyfriend (my dad) cuz he found work out here well my mom got pregnant and had me when she was 23 and my dad left her for another women before she was born. well my mom overdosed and died when i was 15 so i went to go live with my aunt till i was 19 when i got a job n moved out.


well im 22 now and I moved back in with my aunt to help with the bills since both our hours were cut at work. well since my mom died me and my aunt have always been really close cuz we're the only family that each other has. well since i moved in things have been going good but lately my aunt has been showing more affection towards me. like when were watching tv she'll come snuggle up next to me and hold my hand, when we're talking she'll sit on my lap and caress my hair, lay down with me on my bed running her hand up and down my chest n stomach. she's walks around half naked and one time when we were wrestling for fun she stuck her hand down my pants and my grabbed my cock. next i was in my room and she came in ask if could rub some lotion on her back i said sure so she got on top of me reverse cowgirl style and took off her shirt n bra then i started rubbing lotion on her back n legs then she felt me get a erection n she slowly started to dry hump me while was rubbing lotion all over he body. .one time i was laying on the couch and she was laying on top of me and she my erection so she she grabbed it and slowly started rubbing it then she pulled my shorts down and started to suck on it for a little while. till one day we were laying down talking she asked why i have never had a girlfriend i told cuz im ugly and no girl want to be with me, she asked if i was virgin then i said ya i was she then told me that im very handsome and any girl would be lucky to be with me and all i need was an older women to teach me things. she then kissed me on my cheek and i kissed her back on her cheek, she smiled n giggled then kissed me on my lips I kissed her on her lips then we passionately started making , we ripped our clothes off she started sucking on my cock while i sucked on her big ol' juicy titty's and ate her out and then we started to have hot wild sex. this has been going on for at east 3 months already and the sex is great but im starting to feel guilty cuz she my aunt and i know it wrong but i have started to develop some really strong feelings for her and i know she feels the same cuz she saw another girl talking to me the other day she got really jealous. my aunt wants to move to california and start a new life together and im not sure if u stop all of this and stay or if i should go with her and be with her since like i said she's all i have and im all she has. i know this is wrong and i should prolly stop but i don't want it stop i think im gonna go with her to california.


fyi my aunt is freakin hot she's 5"4 long black hair, nice legs, 32 d cup hourglass figure with a nice *** and a nice tight pussy so think about how hard it would be to turn down a women who was that incredibly hot

btw im 22yrs old my aunt is 30yrs old
Its sounds like both of you are enjoying your time together and maybe you to are getting very close. If you really want to be with her, then I say go for it. Begin your lives over again and enjoy it.


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Had sex with my aunt?
okay back story first my mom n aunt are from Houston originally my mom n aunt are the only 2 my grandparents ever had and when my mom was18 they died in a car crash so her n my aunt ( only 3 at the time) moved to arizona with my moms boyfriend (my dad) cuz he found work out here well my mom got pregnant and had me when she was 23 and my dad left her for another women before she was born. well my mom overdosed and died when i was 15 so i went to go live with my aunt till i was 19 when i got a job n moved out.


well im 22 now and I moved back in with my aunt to help with the bills since both our hours were cut at work. well since my mom died me and my aunt have always been really close cuz we're the only family that each other has. well since i moved in things have been going good but lately my aunt has been showing more affection towards me. like when were watching tv she'll come snuggle up next to me and hold my hand, when we're talking she'll sit on my lap and caress my hair, lay down with me on my bed running her hand up and down my chest n stomach. she's walks around half naked and one time when we were wrestling for fun she stuck her hand down my pants and my grabbed my cock. next i was in my room and she came in ask if could rub some lotion on her back i said sure so she got on top of me reverse cowgirl style and took off her shirt n bra then i started rubbing lotion on her back n legs then she felt me get a erection n she slowly started to dry hump me while was rubbing lotion all over he body. .one time i was laying on the couch and she was laying on top of me and she my erection so she she grabbed it and slowly started rubbing it then she pulled my shorts down and started to suck on it for a little while. till one day we were laying down talking she asked why i have never had a girlfriend i told cuz im ugly and no girl want to be with me, she asked if i was virgin then i said ya i was she then told me that im very handsome and any girl would be lucky to be with me and all i need was an older women to teach me things. she then kissed me on my cheek and i kissed her back on her cheek, she smiled n giggled then kissed me on my lips I kissed her on her lips then we passionately started making , we ripped our clothes off she started sucking on my cock while i sucked on her big ol' juicy titty's and ate her out and then we started to have hot wild sex. this has been going on for at east 3 months already and the sex is great but im starting to feel guilty cuz she my aunt and i know it wrong but i have started to develop some really strong feelings for her and i know she feels the same cuz she saw another girl talking to me the other day she got really jealous. my aunt wants to move to california and start a new life together and im not sure if u stop all of this and stay or if i should go with her and be with her since like i said she's all i have and im all she has. i know this is wrong and i should prolly stop but i don't want it stop i think im gonna go with her to california.


fyi my aunt is freakin hot she's 5"4 long black hair, nice legs, 32 d cup hourglass figure with a nice *** and a nice tight pussy so think about how hard it would be to turn down a women who was that incredibly hot

btw im 22yrs old my aunt is 30yrs old
Great. Have fun.
Different Girl Preferences?
Why are white girls into metro-sexual (borderline queer) dudes with gay haircuts, tight jeans (that restrict their tiny balls), high pitched effeminate voices and pussy personalities while black girls are in to REAL MEN?
Pah, Im not into them like that.
I WANT TO KNOW IF IM A SLUT?????????
i wear short shorts ans short skirts i wear lots of black eyeliner, mascara.eyeshadow.and shirts that are to tight boots with high heels and i let boys touch my boobs and pussy.HELP IM 11.
More of a troll than a slut.
What do you think about my lyrics?
Hi, I was wondering if you have time to tell me of what you think about my lyrics. Good? Bad? Thank you. Your opinions are greatly appreciated!

Lyrics:
Verse 1:
Words for Chicago in the dark I have one
Rooted at the ankles by the chains who bind none
Revolutionary exodus up to the sky
Instrumental next to us the structures all stand high
Stable to the coffee shop the lake around the bend
Congregations gather no more reasons to pretend
United the blackest day one way they all must fall
United States of falling fates we tear down all the walls

Chorus 2X:
True to the colors gone invaded the crew, because
Evanston the colors of the orange and blue
Rhymin all the time smoking drinkin what we do
Phenomninal the purpose hedonistic Virgo true

Verse 2:
Got a probable cause, that is to cause lots of problems
Go into the grocery store and grab a baggers bottom
Vagabond from Mexico the cops all went and shot him
Pop a tighter righter pussy shoulda used a condom
Steeple station stable fight back like cane and able
Imaginary places Busdriver was a fable
Possible impossible probable cause and angle
Heaven to the hell man I am pretty like an angel

Chorus 2X

Verse 3:
Welcome to the curse this is my third verse
Evanstonian culture diverse go and immerse
Yourself, expose yourself to riches and wealth
Care for ya body, yo mind yo soul and ya health
Cus I was at party and I thought it was a dream
Rising like the steam, she was for the other team
You know I love the lesbians, the guys know what I mean
Especially the Trevians, they like the salty cream

Well--Lyrical play-- lyrical sun,--lyrical day
I gotta go and travel just to find a spot of shade
Chemical biology I delta all today
The laws of physics evident so bow down 'n' obey
Center to the right well politically I bash
Conervative republicans who only want the cash.
The Doctor's said Im clinically addicted to the stash
The best and freshest buds man burn down all the hash

Chorus 2X
It is not a kind of song that you chant while taking a shower, your lirycs have a degree of difficulty, but it is good most of time, lots of mind images.
Would this look be OK or nahh??? bad choice?
im about 5'3 ( wanna give u an idea of me to help u imagine)

im 43 on butt
23 tummy
and 37 chest

so i wanna wear short shorts white ones with sneakers
and a tight top also with with a bandana

i have long black hair
fully straight
and my face is close to...nicoles from the pussy cat looks only imagine it with mixed with pen cruz or something lol

ANYWAY
do u think??

im meetin a guy so i wanna look good

is the bandana a bad choice?
i would wear a dress but i dont wanna seem like im trying to hard but i wanna look nice
It all seems a little desperate you're trying not to look like you're trying. (If that makes any sense) From your descpription you sound beautiful. I'd with a simple black dress or trouser jeans and a cute top or something classy like that.
What do you guys think?
I know this isnt perfect and I suck at grammar and punctuation I just want some opinions on maybe my style of writing and where I can improve, thanks =)

Sitting apprehensively, Olivia Smithson listened for the awaiting sound of her daughter’s engine to come roaring up the driveway, the sound of Metallica blasting through her speaker system and the moment Olivia’s nightmare would really begin, instead all the sound she could pay attention to was the ticking from the old grandfather’s clock out in the entrance hall, reminding her of how behind time her daughter was.
Embarrassed, she apologised to her boyfriend, who with his five offspring were also waiting just as patiently for Olivia’s delinquent daughter to arrive.
“I’m so sorry about this Charles; in all my life I have never known her to be so late.”
He smiled munificently at his girlfriend, diminutively relaxing her in the uptight situation but all the while she was still mentally cursing at her daughter for humiliating her so significantly. What Olivia and Charles were oblivious to was that of the noiseless morning, when she was sleeping like a baby in his cavernous bed, across town Melissa was creeping in after a night of hard partying at one of Charles’ elite nightclubs, ‘Wilde’ but what both daughter and mother’s boyfriend were unaware of was that during the night they had both unknowingly crossed paths.
“I’ll go and try her cell phone again” As Olivia exited onto the front porch she could have done a cartwheel at the sight of her daughters shiny black Volvo speeding towards her and as forecasted heavy metal that could quite possibly be listened to from the moon.
“Where on this earth have you been?” Olivia spat at her daughter. It was evident that she hadn’t had any sleep, wearing little make-up and presenting dark circles under her eyes it was anyone’s guess how she made it to the house at all.
“I only asked you to be respectful for one day Melissa and turn up on time, you know how important today is for me.”
“Well I’m here now so what you waiting for?” she gestured to the door just as arrogantly as she had spoken. It had been a cold spring in Malibu, but that didn’t stop the sun from shining callously, squinting in the bright light she put her aviators on and followed her mother up to the main doors.
“Now I beg you, behave for just this once, I don’t want to hear any witty comments and NO arguing. Please Mel; I think this one could be the one.”
Olivia halted so abruptly that Melissa walked straight into the back of her, stumbling backwards down the steps and landing flat on her rear. She gave her mother a wicked look before pushing herself up off the ground.
“Just move!” she urged her mother after Olivia started to fuss over her daughter, as if she were still a and not an eighteen year old adult.
“Move mom... I’m alright” she insisted amid fighting her from taking her sunglasses.
“You could have made an effort Melissa” she sneered admiring her daughters unkempt look, it wasn’t as if she were scruffy, Melissa had thought carefully about what she would wear to lunch, even changing her clothes numerous times before settling on a pair of tight skinny jeans, a white racer back top and her signature black leather jacket, accompanied with a pair of killer skyscraper heels.
“This is an important day for us all, a new start for the two of us” After exchanging warning looks they both entered into the extravagant home through the oversized glossy black door, greeted on the other side by a stocky Rottweiler looking as hungry as the people standing behind it.
“She won’t bite” a tall dark, brawny man informed her, a hint of a British tone in his Californian accent.
“She’s a pussy cat really”
“I’m sure!” awkwardly Melissa edged around the beast, not once averting her eyes from its sight.
“Akira, out!” a stern, authoritative voice boomed from the magnificent marble black staircase. The dog looked at her master and obeyed instantly, brushing passed Melissa as she strode out through the main door.
“Charles, this is my daughter Melissa.” She informed him proudly and also to the others who were occupying the hall at present. Unwillingly Melissa removed her sunglasses before turning on her heel to great her mother’s new flame.
It’s Missy actually! Pleasure to meet you Daddy Warbucks” she greeted him impertinently. It was at that moment when both their eyes focused on one another the memories of last night hit the pair like a punch to the stomach.
Your writing style is good. It's better than a lot of the people on here. You're very good with description, but beware of describing too much. Sometimes it's better to keep things simple. You also love commas, which is a trait I share as well. There were a few places that were in need of a period, such as "Instead all the sound she could pay attention" and "You know how important today is for me." Both should be new sentences. Also, in the fourth paragraph you mentioned the parents being unaware of the situation twice, so it was a bit redundant. There are also some confusing places like when you write, "she urged her mother after Olivia started to fuss over her daughter." Did you mean to put "her" in replace for daughter?

But I think your writing is promising. I've certainly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!

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